Showing posts with label monster. Show all posts
Showing posts with label monster. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 26, 2010

#TuesdaySerial: Such A Fine Son (Conclusion)

Such A Fine Son (Conclusion) by Louise Dragon

The remaining months of Wendy’s pregnancy took an unbelievable toll on the teenage girl.  Her grossly distended belly seemed to drain the life from her young body. 

In all of his years of practice, Lyle had never encountered such a devastating pregnancy. 

What little remaining flesh she possessed hugged Wendy’s skeleton much like pictures he had seen of starving children in Africa.  Her once glossy chestnut hair was straw-like and brittle.  Large blue-gray eyes had faded to the drab color of dishwater.  While the fetal heartbeat was strong and regular, Wendy’s blood pressure had dropped alarmingly as the final days of her gestation approached.

Ever sensitive to his patient’s needs, Lyle monitored the girl continually. He spent increasing amounts of time in Wendy’s room, which had taken on a vile, sickly odor no matter how frequently it was cleaned.

As Wendy’s time approached, Lyle’s uneasiness increased.  Power naps seemed no longer necessary as some deeply hidden strength kept the doctor vigorously attuned to his surroundings.  Unfortunately, with his newfound energy, Lyle was experiencing surges of uncontrollable anger:  a rage that was in constant combat with his rationality.

Anger with the police who had let this travesty happen to Wendy in the first place.

Indignation towards Wendy for allowing herself to be so totally violated.

Wrath for himself and his inability to restore her.

Rage against the unborn child who was whittling away at the essence of its helpless parent.

Even an unwonted hostility surrounding Maggie’s inability to keep Wendy’s sick room fresher.

“Dr. Canthrop, isn’t this your night off?” Maggie asked placing herself in his path with hands on her hips.  “I swear, you’re just going to wear yourself out if you don’t take a break.”

Lyle ran a hand over his freshly shaved chin.  “Just wanted to check on the patient,” he said evenly, hands clenching.  “Pressure’s low, have you increased those supplements, like I asked?”  He forced his hands to relax.

Apparently sensing his mood, Maggie nodded and returned to the nurse’s station. 

That tiny look of fear in her eyes was not lost on Lyle but rather seemed to incense another of those increasing rushes of fury.

Inside Wendy’s room, the birth of the child was imminent.  While the girl’s vital signs were almost nonexistent, the fetal heart monitor was singing with life.  The large mound that was Wendy’s abdomen churned and squirmed between contractions. 

Nervously, Lyle scratched his chin.  Feeling angry stubble, he knew he must work fast.  With steady hands and a sharp scalpel, Lyle performed an efficient Caesarian Section on little Wendy.

The healthy baby boy was a joy to behold.  Tiny clawed feet and hands waved wildly once the cord was cut.  Little sharp teeth clamped down on Lyle’s finger as he cleared the airway.  Lovingly, Lyle wiped the bloody mucous from the down covered little body of his son.

Tap, tap, tap.

“Dr. Canthrop, Detective Steiger wants . . .”

The infant let out a sharp howling wail as Maggie entered the room.  Standing in the open doorway, her face a study of perplexity, Maggie opened her mouth. Lyle, sensing the forthcoming scream, immediately slashed through her vocal cords with the silver scalpel held awkwardly in a taloned fist.  A fleeting feeling of remorse crossed his rapidly mutating brain as a bright stream of crimson quickly transformed Maggie’s white nurse’s dress into a red nightmare. 

Suddenly, the face of Detective Hans Steiger appeared in the high patch of glass seizing Lyle’s full attention.  Maggie’s prone body across the bottom of the door began to slide jerkily as the detective pushed fiercely from the other side.  Steiger, with all the grace of a beached walrus, stumbled over the dead legs of the nurse and landed face first, his drawn gun skittering under Wendy’s bed.  

The squalling infant, as if sensing danger, became suddenly quiet.  The thing that had been Lyle Canthrop, MD, emitting little grunts of exertion, used its dagger-like claws to rip out the detective’s throat insuring his silence for eternity. 

As the remainder of Wendy Wheeler’s precious blood drained out of her abdominal incision, her breathing became sharp little gasps.  The Lyle-monster, cradling his beloved little offspring, paused at her bedside. 

With a raspy voice from its fang-filled mouth, the beast grated out the last horrible words that Wendy’s tortured ears would ever have to listen to.  “Thank you for sssuch a fine ssson.”

With an awkward gentleness uncommon to this beast, the monster clumsily closed the blue-gray eyes for the last time. 
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Tuesday, September 14, 2010

#TuesdaySerial: Such A Fine Son (Part One)

Such A Fine Son
By
Louise Dragon


Wendy Wheeler’s flashlight cast a feeble glow through the darkness. The path, etched through the woods by the feet of hundreds of children, would eventually cross Main Street in Waterville. Town Crest Village, the housing project where Wendy lived, loomed behind her on the brink of Coca-Cola Ledge.


Wendy skipped lightly over tree roots and rocks, her thoughts already down on the streets with her friends. She loved the city streets; there was always some kind of excitement going on in town. If Ma only knew . . .


“Don’t ever take the path after dark, Honey,” Ma had said so many times.


“Heaven knows what perverts sleep in those woods. I shudder to think about it.”


But Wendy took the path many times after dark and had never encountered a soul. She usually giggled down the path with Sophie Freedman, but tonight her best friend was at choir rehearsal.


With Sophie along, Wendy had never noticed how quiet the path was, or how the tree branches seemed to reach out towards her as she skipped past. A vague feeling of alarm tugged at the tiny hairs on the back of Wendy’s neck just before her flashlight sputtered and died. She stopped dead on the murky Path. A faint breeze rattled tall branches overhead, like fingernails tapping. Wendy bit down hard on her lower lip.


Trying to rationalize her fear, she peered anxiously about in the gloom.


There! Did something move?


As she was about to sprint off like a frightened rabbit, the dark clouds above parted. The silver mottled moon beamed through a hexagon in the tree branches touching her surroundings with shimmer blight. Small white moths fluttering before her in the moonbeam eased Wendy’s thudding heartbeat. She let out a sharp caw of relief.


After a few hesitant steps, however, the clouds captured the moonlight plunging her once again into darkness. At the sudden eclipse, a tiny sound of fear escaped her lips making her jump involuntarily.


Up ahead on the path, the darkness seemed to boil and twitch.


The sharp snap of a twig.


A grunt.


There was definitely someone on the path. Visions of dirty street people flashed through Wendy’s mind. Old looking men wrapped in newspapers, their rheumy eyes peeking out to watch the streets.


“Heaven knows what perverts sleep in those woods. I shudder . . .
I shudder . . .” Ma’s words echoed into her fear. “Not after dark . . . perverts sleep in those woods . . . I shudder . . . I shudder . . .”


Wendy’s fear turned into blind panic as the snapping of twigs grew louder.


Blindly, she turned and bolted. Whoever was coming up the path, sounded big.


Heavy breathing and grunting noises thundered closer. Trees crackled and branches thrashed as the quaking footfalls closed in.


Something solid struck Wendy between the shoulder blades. The loud thud rang in her ears as she lost her footing and sprawled into a bed of crunchy leaves.


The clouds thinned, triggering a faded grayish light.


Wendy rolled over to face her attacker. The sight of the beast overwhelmed her young brain, crippling her mind and body: blue-gray eyes glassed over, lithe body sagged. Watching the scene as though from afar, Wendy Wheeler’s mind overloaded in its final attempt to shield her from the horror.


The beast, bear-like and slobbering, was no mere pervert. Thick dark fur covered most of its body. Claws, like mini daggers sprouted from almost human fingers. Yellow fangs coursed twin rivers of saliva over a heavily bearded chin. The creature’s chest and abdomen were leathery pink and strangely hairless ending in a massive erection. Huge dark sunken eyes held a look of madness as it roared and grabbed the prone girl.


Shaking her like a rag doll, the monster tore the clothes from her limp body.


With an inhuman animal lust it penetrated the girl. A single high shrill scream issued from her blue lips driving the attacker to a fevered frenzy of biting, clawing and thrusting. Evil seeds discharged, the monster stood and gazed down into Wendy’s wide blue-gray eyes. Tears and snot mixed with the girl’s blood and fell from the creature’s face leaving ragged pink dots on her naked flesh. Balefully, the thing raised its massive head to the moon and moaned with hopeless anguish.


A police siren wafting up through the tangle of trees brought the beast to a wary crouch.


From her broken body, the tortured blue-gray eyes of Wendy Wheeler watched the beast flee into the shadowy forest. With it went her soul.


Continued . . .

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Friday, June 11, 2010

#flashfriday: The Chance of a Lifetime

The Chance of a Lifetime
By Louise Dragon


“I’ll bring the kids, then and pick you up at your place, say . . . sevenish?” Monty’s rich, sweet voice oozed like caramel from the phone.


Suzanna hesitated, biting her lip. “Um.”


“Are you afraid of me, sweetheart?” Those soft rich tones – smooth in her left ear.


“A little, I guess,” Suzanna admitted. “All of my friends keep telling me -- Be Careful. They say that I haven’t known you long enough. They say I’m too naive. They say I could get hurt.”


“But what do YOU say?” the buttery voice asked.


Suzanna sighed. She took a huge breath. The fear of telling a complete stranger about her troubles was intoxicating somehow. Exhilarating! After all, she hadn’t divulged her address. She was still safe in her own little apartment connected merely by phone and Internet wires.


“I say . . .” she began, enjoying a man’s full attention for the first time in years. “I say -- I’m tired of being alone. I say -- it’s hard to raise two kids on my own. I say – it’s not wrong if two people with similar circumstances want to meet and talk.” Suzanna took another deep breath and fought to hold back tears.


“I just wish I knew more about you,” she said sadly.


Monty’s musical chuckle was like trilling lovebirds in Suzanna’s ear.


“There’s only one way to do that,” he whispered sweetly. “Meet with me. We’ll take the kids for ice cream. If you don’t like me, I’ll take a hike with no regrets. If you do like me, we’ll talk. Nothing wrong with talking is there? Honey, I’m lonely too. Somehow I get the feeling that our meeting in that chat room for single parents was fate. Pure fate; the chance of a lifetime.”


“244 Dove Hill Road, apartment 13,” Suzanna blurted and then clasped her hand over her mouth.


What have I done? Immediately came to mind.


Another silvery chuckle from the phone. “You won’t be sorry, sweetheart,” Monty crooned. “See you at seven.”


An icicle of fear trailed down Suzanna’s back and she shivered slightly.


“He’s right,” she said out loud to the empty room. “No harm in two lonely people just talking. This could be my chance of a lifetime.” She hugged herself briefly, looked at the clock, smiled shakily, and rushed off to get ready.


~~~


In a darkened apartment about twenty miles from Dove Hill Road, Monty flipped closed his cell phone and smiled.


A naked dead woman dangled from the ceiling beams before him like a slaughtered animal. Her raped body, just beginning to cool, bore the brutal marks of recent torture. Her swollen purple face above a bloody and knotted silk scarf gazed sightlessly at her killer with a sereneness that told him her death had been a blessing.


“Hope you enjoyed your chance of a lifetime,” Monty sobbed as he turned and briskly left the apartment by the back door.


He dodged children’s toys in the back yard, but did not what to think about those right now. He knew he was a monster and he was on his way to prove it yet again.
End



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