tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post8723281747371891080..comments2023-10-25T03:39:07.884-04:00Comments on What Scares You?: #fridayflash: A Precious StoneWeezelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-55070655891890525172010-01-26T11:27:41.449-05:002010-01-26T11:27:41.449-05:00Creepy, but so beautiful, I loved it! very well do...Creepy, but so beautiful, I loved it! very well done! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-10089297292453050012010-01-26T10:47:03.428-05:002010-01-26T10:47:03.428-05:00Very cool!! I liked it a lot. Not at all what I ha...Very cool!! I liked it a lot. Not at all what I had expected at the end!! :-)V.R. Leavitthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04695046154516205907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-9687561114705010062010-01-25T04:32:32.230-05:002010-01-25T04:32:32.230-05:00Creepy stuff, I wonder though, who is going to lug...Creepy stuff, I wonder though, who is going to lug it to the graveyard when she finishes it ? <br /><br />Good stuffRobert St-John Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12514521443060733196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-87774705084448568212010-01-24T17:30:59.805-05:002010-01-24T17:30:59.805-05:00Thanks to everyone who dropped by to read and comm...Thanks to everyone who dropped by to read and comment. Your input is always welcome and really makes me want to continue with my writing!Weezelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-34896199873232401282010-01-24T16:27:16.089-05:002010-01-24T16:27:16.089-05:00Maybe her mother nagged her to death. I know if I ...Maybe her mother nagged her to death. I know if I was sculpting in the basement the last thing I would want is my mother poking her head in every five minutes. <br /><br />Seriously, that was a pleasure to read and a good strong image in words - sculpted, if you will...Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-88940677065689272892010-01-24T10:47:17.670-05:002010-01-24T10:47:17.670-05:00nicely done! i enjoyed several aspects of this sto...nicely done! i enjoyed several aspects of this story... the artist that gets so enveloped by her work that she actually becomes one with it (taken a step further, with the neat turn of this story)... the mother, defined in her motherhood, desperately trying to reach out and help her daughter - had the vibe of frantic concern that she be allowed to do something, anything to help... the concern about health deteriorating due to obsession... the running theme of coldness on all levels... all nicely displayed to ponder over. great story.brookelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17072351866499494676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-28149771418555460592010-01-24T10:32:14.610-05:002010-01-24T10:32:14.610-05:00I wonder why she seemed so cold to her mother? heh...I wonder why she seemed so cold to her mother? heh<br /><br />Hope she finds peace once she's finished.CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-43509156512927033922010-01-24T09:00:57.408-05:002010-01-24T09:00:57.408-05:00Nice and creepy. Supernatural determination. Maybe...Nice and creepy. Supernatural determination. Maybe she'll be at peace once it's finished.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-90026025208615687952010-01-23T14:17:57.445-05:002010-01-23T14:17:57.445-05:00Wow. At first it reminded me of stories of Michela...Wow. At first it reminded me of stories of Michelangelo, how he'd go for days without bathing or eating because he was so caught up in his work, but you took it even farther... Michelangelo meets the supernatural.<br /><br />Great job. Incredible.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-16794808061005929062010-01-23T11:25:55.184-05:002010-01-23T11:25:55.184-05:00Very cool! Now that's determination! Great sto...Very cool! Now that's determination! Great story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-66126605482588302842010-01-23T11:07:34.950-05:002010-01-23T11:07:34.950-05:00I don't know how you guys come up with these t...I don't know how you guys come up with these twists - awesome and.....chilling!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06279040381509033619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-54600678726353606312010-01-23T07:55:42.117-05:002010-01-23T07:55:42.117-05:00FogDog Weight Loss
Great story... hairs on the bac...<a href="http://fogdogweightloss.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">FogDog Weight Loss</a><br />Great story... hairs on the back of my neck stood up when I got to the end.FogDoghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16261774071964785378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-34258929116619426132010-01-23T06:42:32.366-05:002010-01-23T06:42:32.366-05:00"...I died an hour ago.” pretty good but what..."...I died an hour ago.” pretty good but what about "...I died in '87." Does that change the degree of creepiness? Now the old lady is as whacked as the daughter. I dunno. great story Wzl.The Remembrance Treehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16728143741380422538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-26241869615548167772010-01-23T04:28:00.913-05:002010-01-23T04:28:00.913-05:00Consider me creeped!
Cool concept, turning into he...Consider me creeped!<br />Cool concept, turning into her own obsessionmazzz_in_Leedshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01498100483681096442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-67287861165661230682010-01-22T19:16:19.598-05:002010-01-22T19:16:19.598-05:00I think this is one of my favorites. It's int...I think this is one of my favorites. It's interesting how you built a compelling plot and characters almost entirely through dialogue. Nice, horrific piece!Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-35418691753790987752010-01-22T18:31:17.727-05:002010-01-22T18:31:17.727-05:00Good grief, there are a lot of creepy Friday Flash...Good grief, there are a lot of creepy Friday Flash stories this week! Nice twist at the end -- the animated corpse making her own tombstone. <br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.com