tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post4605179672512638029..comments2023-10-25T03:39:07.884-04:00Comments on What Scares You?: #fridayflash: Carillon BeautyWeezelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04441857346642599256noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-18809932284620770632010-02-18T16:06:37.512-05:002010-02-18T16:06:37.512-05:00A well woven tale. Beauty is a dangerous thing - ...A well woven tale. Beauty is a dangerous thing - I like that idea.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-63342817818803331422010-02-16T22:56:03.338-05:002010-02-16T22:56:03.338-05:00Wwwwowwww, the eyeball thing was so out there. Nob...Wwwwowwww, the eyeball thing was so out there. Nobody escapes a transformation like that unscathed. Nice finish.Donald Conradhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11299995538611948494noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-39628426400096180152010-02-15T21:31:35.510-05:002010-02-15T21:31:35.510-05:00The beauty came out and the ugly went in, all from...The beauty came out and the ugly went in, all from a creepy music box. I wasn't completely freaked out until the eyeballs. That put me over the edge. Why do I read your stuff before bed? :)Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-38691596648252203722010-02-15T10:42:37.280-05:002010-02-15T10:42:37.280-05:00Makes me wonder how many other people had been tur...Makes me wonder how many other people had been turned into a beautiful monster like she has been. Wonder what happens if they meet?CJ Hodges MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16833789408143274185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-60504014664381405802010-02-14T23:03:11.869-05:002010-02-14T23:03:11.869-05:00Yikes! Not just a twist -- you've turned her i...Yikes! Not just a twist -- you've turned her inside out.~Timhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06774944172261988587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-2639832382939479842010-02-13T17:42:23.318-05:002010-02-13T17:42:23.318-05:00Fabulous! All of her ugly outside went inside. Lov...Fabulous! All of her ugly outside went inside. Loved the collection of eyeballs.Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-81976654944253767132010-02-13T12:51:56.456-05:002010-02-13T12:51:56.456-05:00There's always a price, isn't there? Great...There's always a price, isn't there? Great tale!shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-2920243820772167842010-02-13T12:11:58.261-05:002010-02-13T12:11:58.261-05:00"...With piercing beaks of melody, the music ..."...With piercing beaks of melody, the music throbbed into her soul..."<br /><br />It's passages such as this, adding to a twisted ending. So many times your storyline progresses to a point of complete surprise, which is Wzl scary. Nice'un!The Remembrance Treehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16728143741380422538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-15727945778616257582010-02-13T10:45:48.798-05:002010-02-13T10:45:48.798-05:00Another great story Louise! Too bad Gwen could'...Another great story Louise! Too bad Gwen could'nt have it all, she deserved more - but then where would the horror be? I especially love your description of loneliness like a heavy woolen cloak.<br /><br />I can't help noticing you write a lot of mother/daughter tales, such a pervasive relationship isn't it?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06279040381509033619noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-36330004100902343192010-02-13T00:24:06.893-05:002010-02-13T00:24:06.893-05:00Clever and enchanting. Very well done.
-David G Sh...Clever and enchanting. Very well done.<br />-David G ShrockAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-8826663175318176162010-02-12T15:02:19.412-05:002010-02-12T15:02:19.412-05:00I would have plucked out Cynthia's eyeballs fi...I would have plucked out Cynthia's eyeballs first.<br />Engrossing tale... <br />I always say to my kids, looks aren't everything... but if you were as scarred physically as Gwen, looks would be absolutely everything. <br />Nice work!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4791820025107469167.post-47958147128557767072010-02-12T11:11:03.428-05:002010-02-12T11:11:03.428-05:00Wow! An updated twist to the Dorian Gray tale. Ver...Wow! An updated twist to the Dorian Gray tale. Very cleverly done.<br /><br />I wonder, if given such a chance, what people would pick?Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.com